Hi Nisha!
Well, it was a good attempt at reciting the poem. However, you did not really sound like someone "in love". You sounded very "matter of fact", like you were making factual statements. Let us hear the "love and devotion" in your voice ;-)
Please check also the pronunciation of "height" and some other words. Do not hesitate to come and see me if you need assistance.
Hi Nisha!
Well, it was a good attempt at reciting the poem. However, you did not really sound like someone "in love". You sounded very "matter of fact", like you were making factual statements. Let us hear the "love and devotion" in your voice ;-)
Please check also the pronunciation of "height" and some other words. Do not hesitate to come and see me if you need assistance.